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when i arrived in the park,one of the girls went home because the front wheel of her bicycle was broken.I drank so much water that i wet my brother.After i splashed him,i ran to the swings.When i got there,my brother met his friend and stopped being mad at me.i played at the swings for a couple of minutes but then i saw that my brother had left his bike next to a bench so i went there and tried to climb it.i didnt succeed until i climed up the bench and finally succeeded to ride it. 
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